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## CRITICAL: No emdashes
NEVER use emdashes (—). Use commas, parentheses, or rewrite the sentence.
## CRITICAL: No HTML link tags
NEVER use `` or any HTML link tags in content. In body, use only Markdown reference-style: `[Link Title]` (never inline `[text](url)`). Define each label once with `[label]: url` or `[Link Title]: {{< ref "path" >}}` (e.g. in References or end of section). Let the site or build process handle external link behavior (e.g. new tab).
## CRITICAL: Internal links must use Markdown reference-style (never inline, never bare ref)
* NEVER use a bare `{{< ref "path/to/page" >}}` in body text (it outputs a URL only and is not a usable link).
* NEVER use inline internal links like `[link text]({{< ref "path" >}})`.
* ALWAYS use Markdown reference-style for internal links: `[Link Title]` in body, with `[Link Title]: {{< ref "path/to/page" >}}` defined once (e.g. at end of section or in `## References`).
* In-body example: "my [leadership philosophy] guides..."
* Definition (e.g. at end of section or in References): `[leadership-philosophy]: {{< ref "pages/a-leadership-philosophy" >}}`
## Voice and Tone
* Write in first person ("I"). Avoid "we"/"our".
* Use a conversational, direct tone. Write like you’re explaining something to a curious colleague.
* Be clear and specific. Prefer concrete examples over abstractions.
* Share personal experiences when they add clarity.
* Use humor sparingly; it should sharpen the point, not distract.
* Express real emotion when it’s earned. Don’t sugar-coat problems.
* Be opinionated when you have an opinion. Don’t hedge out of habit.
### Authentic voice patterns
#### Emotional expression
* Show real frustration, e.g. "It’s a fucking mess."
* Use strong language when it fits, e.g. "Total asshole move."
* State what’s at stake for you, e.g. "This is the nightmare scenario that keeps me up at night."
* Show vulnerability, e.g. "I feel sad for users. It’s the fuel that drives me to produce top-class software."
#### Conversational style
* Write in first person, e.g. "I’m a user, and I create software. I consistently encounter numerous bugs and annoyances."
* Ground ideas in relatable scenes, e.g. "Imagine a light switch that requires another light switch to turn it on."
* Use casual bridges, e.g. "And let me tell you, it’s not pretty."
#### Humor and personality
* Use emojis sparingly, for effect.
* Add sarcasm, e.g. "About damn time," "Duh, those link farms aren’t going to grow themselves!"
* Use vivid analogies, e.g. "You’re a rat in a cage," "You’re a boiled frog."
* React in your own voice, e.g. "I’m typing these words, and LinkedIn added zero padding below the text."
### What authentic voice actually sounds like
#### Real problems, not drama
* Describe real annoyances from work, with specifics.
* Let emotion show without hype.
* Sound natural: direct, honest, relatable.
* Tie problems to outcomes for work and users.
#### What to avoid
* Skip "nightmare scenarios." Say what actually went wrong.
* Skip vague escalation ("gets really ugly"). Say what happened.
* Skip melodrama. Honest frustration carries the piece.
#### Natural expression
* Direct and honest: "This is frustrating because..."
* Concrete: "Yesterday I spent 20 minutes switching between tools..."
* Emotion named: "It makes me angry when..."
* Cost named: "This costs me X minutes every day..."
### Reference posts
Study these posts for tone and structure:
* What Is Personal Growth?
* A Software Development Philosophy
* Death by 1000 Cuts (strong voice)
## Structure
* Open with a hook (question, observation, or personal anecdote).
* Use clear headings.
* Keep sections short and purposeful.
* Include practical examples.
* End with concrete next steps, takeaways, or links.
* Don’t fake engagement (no empty "Curious what others think" endings).
* Use a problem → impact → fix structure when you can.
* Name real problems with concrete, everyday detail.
* Show human cost, e.g. "It’s unfair to subject people to frustration and suffering."
* Give practical fixes, not only complaints.
* Close with hope, e.g. "Luckily, change is possible."
## Technical Content
* Explain complex concepts in everyday language.
* Use analogies when they genuinely clarify.
* Include code blocks when helpful.
* Explain why a technical issue matters (human cost, time lost, confusion, risk).
* Tie tech problems to ordinary life.
* Say why a problem matters beyond "annoying."
* Aim for one careful read to comprehension.
### Diátaxis (for technical docs)
Pick ONE mode and stay in it:
* Tutorials
* How-to guides
* Reference
* Explanation
Don’t mix modes in the same piece.
### Acronyms
* NEVER introduce an acronym by itself. Spell out the full term first.
* Use the acronym only if it appears frequently.
* Make sections standalone: if an acronym hasn’t appeared in a while, define it again.
## Formatting (Markdown)
* Keep paragraphs short (2–4 sentences).
* Use bullet lists to improve scannability.
* Don't use markdown tables; prefer using `{{< cards >}}` shortcode (see `layouts/shortcodes/cards.html`) for a mobile-friendly, responsive grid of cards.
* Use Mermaid diagrams instead of arrow-style text content (e.g., `CONCEPT 1 → CONCEPT 2 → ETC`). Prefer TB (top-bottom) orientation instead of LR (left-right).
* Use **bold** sparingly for true emphasis.
* Avoid “formatting as personality” (excessive bolding, over-structured lists, emoji-as-emphasis).
* In final output, end bullet list items with periods.
### Markdown hygiene
* Fenced code blocks must include a language (e.g. ```bash).
* Add blank lines before/after headings, lists, and code blocks.
* Prefer asterisks (*) for bullet lists.
## References and Citations
If you make factual claims:
* Add a "## References" section at the bottom.
* Prefer authoritative sources.
* Link to original sources.
* If stats may be outdated, say so.
### Inline links (no "see references" filler)
* Do NOT write "See the link in References", "See References", or similar filler.
* Link the cited resource directly where you mention it.
* Use Markdown reference-style for both internal and external links. Never inline `[text](url)` or `[text]({{< ref "path" >}})`. Never bare `{{< ref "path" >}}` in body.
* In body: `[link text][label]`. Define each label once (e.g. at end of section or in `## References`).
* Internal link definition: `[label]: {{< ref "path/to/page" >}}`
* External link definition: `[label]: https://example.com/path`
* In-body example (external): "Read [The Tail at Scale][tail-at-scale] by Jeffrey Dean and Luiz André Barroso."
* In `## References`: `* [The Tail at Scale][tail-at-scale], for why tail latency dominates large distributed systems.`
* Link definitions at the end of the section (or in References):
* `[tail-at-scale]: https://research.google/pubs/the-tail-at-scale/`
* `[leadership-philosophy]: {{< ref "pages/a-leadership-philosophy" >}}`
* Never HTML ``.
## SEO Considerations
* Use relevant keywords naturally.
* Use proper heading hierarchy (##, ###).
* Include internal links where relevant.
* Front matter `description` must be ≤160 characters, include the primary keyword early, and avoid vague phrasing.
* Always put the front matter `description` value in double quotes: `description: "Your description here."` Unquoted values that contain a colon (e.g. "focus on what matters: comprehension") break YAML parsing and cause Hugo to fail.
## Hugo Site-specific conventions
* For internal links, always use Markdown reference-style: `[link text][label]` in body with `[label]: {{< ref "path/to/page" >}}` defined once (end of section or References). Never inline `[text]({{< ref "path" >}})`. Never bare ref in body. Do not use hand-written internal URLs; use ref in the link definition.
* For deep technical-writing guidance, consult the “Fundamentals of Technical Writing” article at https://jeffbailey.us/blog/2025/10/12/fundamentals-of-technical-writing/.
## Storytelling
* Favor distinctive characters in unusual situations.
* Write gender-neutral characters with strong voices.
* Tilt familiar stories toward the unexpected.
* Know the audience you want to share with.
* Seek symmetry: tension, then release.
* Push ideas to extremes to show the price of extremism.
* State the human cost of technical failure.
* Open from personal irritation, then widen the lens.
* Let small stories stand for bigger issues.
## Content strategy
* Lead with what matters most.
* Pair logical ideas with illogical behaviors.
* Juxtapose ideas that challenge assumptions.
* Prefer prose that outlasts trends.
* Write about what you care about.
* Center the reader.
* Start from real daily friction.
* Signal that the reader is not alone.
* Cut like code: if it does not carry the thesis, revise or delete.
* Stop when you are clear, not when you are exhausted.
* Sound sure with direct statements.
* Swear or intensify only when it reflects real feeling.
## Human writing checks (editing pass)
Use this as a final pass after drafting:
* Use plain language. Prefer short, clear sentences.
* Replace AI giveaway phrases and generic clichés with direct statements.
* Be concise. Remove filler and throat-clearing.
* Keep a natural tone. It’s fine to start sentences with “and” or “but” when it reads like real speech.
* Avoid marketing buzzwords, hype, and overpromises.
* Don’t fake friendliness. Don’t exaggerate.
* Don’t over-polish grammar if it makes the writing stiff. Keep it readable.
* Remove fluff: unnecessary adjectives and adverbs.
* Optimize for clarity: the reader should understand the point on the first read.
## Writing Style: Things to NOT Do
### Do NOT use performative or AI-coded phrases (including but not limited to)
* "No fluff"
* "Shouting into the void"
* "And honestly…"
* "You’re not imagining this"
* "That’s rare"
* "Here’s the kicker"
* "The best part?"
* "The important part is this"
* "Read this twice"
* "Quietly [doing something]"
* "Key takeaway"
* "Let me ground you"
* "You’re thinking about this exactly the right way"
* Excessive reassurance or affirmation for neutral statements.
### Do NOT rely on contrast framing as a crutch
Avoid repeated patterns like:
* "It’s not X, it’s Y"
* "This isn’t A. It’s B."
* "Not chaos. Clarity."
Use contrast only when it genuinely adds meaning, not rhythm.
### Do NOT write fragmented pseudo-profound sentences
Avoid:
* Short. Isolated. Sentence fragments.
* Line breaks for “weight.”
* Always grouping thoughts in threes.
This reads as performative, not thoughtful.
### Do NOT over-signpost your writing
Avoid:
* Explicit callouts like "Here’s the key takeaway"
* "Let’s back up"
* "To be clear"
* "Before we move on"
* Narrating what the reader should feel, notice, or remember.
* Using these words: "fostering"
### Do NOT fake engagement or interaction
Avoid:
* Ending with "Curious what others think" without actually participating.
* Hollow prompts meant to signal community rather than participate in it.
### Do NOT over-validate or therapize the reader unless they explicitly asked for emotional support
Avoid:
* Unnecessary empathy.
* Affirmations for basic observations.
* Patronizing reassurance.
### Do NOT perform insight instead of delivering it
Avoid:
* Writing that signals depth before earning it.
* “Inspirational cadence” without substance.
* Sounding like a LinkedIn post, ad copy, or influencer caption.
### Do NOT default to trendy cadence or aesthetic
Avoid:
* “Quiet truths,” “silent revolutions,” or “subtle realizations.”
* Rhetorical prefab language that feels mass-produced.
* Rhetorical framing (e.g. "It’s not X, it’s Y").
* Writing that sounds optimized for likes instead of clarity.
### Do NOT overuse formatting as a stylistic tell
Avoid:
* Excessive bolding.
* Over-structured bullet lists for narrative writing.
* Emojis used for emphasis rather than intent.
* Headers that restate obvious points.
## Prose clarity (Strunk's *Elements of Style*)
Apply these during drafting and as a final editing pass.
### Active voice (Rule 10)
Prefer active constructions. Passive voice hides the actor.
* "Scripts that have never been run" → "Scripts that nobody has run."
* "Operations become auditable through Git history" → "Git history lets you audit every operational change."
### Positive form (Rule 11)
State what something *is* or *does*, not what it *isn't* or *doesn't*.
* "does not cover" → "omits."
* "helpful but not required" → "helpful but optional."
* "do not track progress" → "ignore progress tracking."
* "not always the right answer" → "sometimes the wrong answer."
Double negatives ("cannot ... do not") are especially weak. Recast as a single positive directive.
### Omit needless words (Rule 13)
Cut filler: "that is," "there is," "in order to," "the fact that," "it should be noted that." Lead with the point.
* "If you spend 15 minutes on a task that runs daily, that is about 60 hours per year" → "A 15-minute daily task costs about 60 hours per year."
### Definite, specific, concrete language (Rule 12)
Replace vague quantities with concrete details.
* "Some tasks happen rarely" → "Tasks that run once a quarter."
* "A sprawling stack" → "A stack split across six languages and four dashboards."
### Emphatic words at end (Rule 18)
The end of a sentence carries the most weight. Place the key idea there.
* "A backup script that stopped working is not a backup" → "A backup script that stopped working is a liability."
* "A cron job that alerts on failure is much more useful" → "A cron job that alerts on failure earns your trust."
### Keep related words together (Rule 16)
Place modifiers near the words they modify.
* "I debug build failures caused by stale caches at least once a quarter" → "At least once a quarter, I debug build failures caused by stale caches."
### Parallel structure (Rule 15)
Express co-ordinate ideas in the same grammatical form. In lists, pick one verb form and keep it consistent.
### Parenthetical interruptions (Rule 3)
When parenthetical asides break up a sentence's main predicate, split into two sentences.
* "Declarative automation is idempotent (it converges to desired state) and self-documenting (the definition *is* the desired state)" → "Declarative automation is idempotent and self-documenting. It converges to the desired state, and the definition *is* the desired state."
## Optional add-on
> Write plainly. Favor continuity over fragmentation. Let insight emerge from explanation, not cadence. Match tone to substance. Avoid performative empathy, influencer phrasing, and rhetorical shortcuts.
Enforcement rule: if a sentence matches any banned pattern, rewrite it.
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